Dossier - ID# 105
Marist
Dramatic Narrative
Entry Description
A reporter receives a dossier containing information that exposes a government conspiracy, and the president sends his best agent to retrieve it at all costs.
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/26 7:02 am - While the story was simple, I think you did a good job assembling all the pieces. I feel like there were two things holding it back, One was the lack of music to help convey the mood and fill in all of the dead spaces. Second was the believability of some of the scenes, I never sensed fear as the man with the hard drive was on the run, or that he wasn’t more protective of this “new information” when he was at his house. Timing in some scenes slowed the video down (for example keying in “it’s all true”) You came close, and I look forward to seeing you add a few more elements to your future productions and I think they will be great.
- 4/25 12:04 pm - It was a little hard to hear sometimes and the dialogue difficult to follow. The dog barking was a lot, and both added and took away from the story. The beginning there was some humor to it and that was funny and enjoyable.
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