Friends? - ID# 116

Morton East
Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

"A person talks to his self-conscious and raises his self-acceptance". Music Resources: Manchester Music Library-Volume 17, Track 15. License was purchased from Production Garden Music on January 31, 2007. Unlimited Usage Lifetime Blanket/Royalty-Free.

Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/26 7:06 am - I understand that this is an animation, but I always tell my students to show it, not say it. I didn’t feel like I was watching a story unfold but rather I was reading a series of billboards as I was driving down the highway. The story you choose to tell was good and important, but the animation (because of its simplicity) didn’t allow you the freedom to really tell the story. I am sure you can understand It is hard to judge the animations in this category because there is just something on the rubric that don’t apply and automatically make it hard to compare.
  • 4/25 10:46 am - It was an interesting concept. Having the words and chat boxes animate more could have made it feel more like a full animation. The music worked well with what was happening.
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