3/5 2:47 pm - Positives:
Nice job using tight shots to connect with the actors who are delivering soliloquies, but when it goes on for a long time you need to switch to another angle with perhaps medium framing for interest and to show the reactions of the other actors. Areas for improvement:
Needs some wide shots to establish the performance space, :25-:27 where the chorus chimes in would have been one opportunity to do this at the beginning. It's challenging to know who will speak next if you don't know the play, but always be ready to cut to a wide shot if the actor who is speaking is not in the frame of the current shot.
3/3 8:29 pm - Good job with smooth zooms and pans to follow the action. Some nice cuts to capture the action. The beginning would have benefitted from more wide or full shots to show us where everyone was—there was a voice off-camera (the attorney), but we had never seen his placement in relation to the main characters.