Cooking With Sobz: Cookies - ID# 155

John Hersey High School

Demonstration

Entry Description

Chef Sobz and Chef Magda showcase two cookie recipes perfect for the holidays.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/24 10:09 am - *Strengths: 1, Video quality 2. Shot from inside the oven. Let's see more creative shots like this one! 3. Appropriate music for the holiday cookies. *Areas on which to work: 1. In addition to speeding up the video, what other techniques could be used to show the passage of time? 2. A tripod will help you attain steadier shots and give pieces like this one a more polished appearance. 3. The steps in your process identify what needs to be done and the order in which they need to be completed. You can strengthen your demonstration by providing more information regarding the techniques needed to complete various steps in the procedure. To present a thorough and clear procedure, you would not have time for two separate demonstrations. 4. You can strengthen the clarity of your process by incorporating a voice-over narration. Your narration also can include relevant and interesting background information related to your topic. 5. Continue to look for creative ways to begin and end your pieces.
• 4/2 12:22 pm - The pace was too fast to follow. Maybe a good choice to just create one type of cookie and slow it down. Music choice good energy kept it flowing. Video looked good but the angle needed to change. Just to repetitious and too fast to learn anything.
• 3/4 1:27 pm - Use outline or drop shadow on graphics to make them stand out a bit more. Maybe don’t need to show the whole mixing process. Some elements could be trimmed and then slowed down—parts are sped up too fast (too manic). Nice variety of shots. Maybe use a couple of different tracks of music for more variety.

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