MMEA Fest

4/24 12:04 pm - *Strengths: 1. Acceptable shot variation, including some effective close ups. 2. Sound fizzing - nice touch. Are there other points where additional audio elements would enhance your demonstration? *Areas for improvement: 1. A tripod will help you attain steadier shots and give your piece a more polished appearance. 2. The steps in your process identify what needs to be done and the order in which they need to be completed. You can strengthen your demonstration by providing more information regarding the techniques required to complete various steps in the procedure. 3. Your narration also can include relevant and interesting background information related to your topic. The process alone likely will not be enough to keep the audience engaged. This information could be used to fill in the quiet spaces in your piece.
4/2 1:13 pm - Nice movement to graphics. All the video is underexposed. Nice movement in the shots. Nice composition. Some interesting angles. Music fit well. Overall nice job.
3/4 2:03 pm - Music is appropriate. Speaker is clear. I like that you offer tips about what to avoid. It would help to have a tripod for some shots. Its not clear how you are supposed to use them? Just sit them in the shower on the side of the tub and pour water on them? The lighting gets really dark at the end.

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