Copyright free music by: Oskar https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TJMK2lIReIg https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iddVzyOkD6M
Positives: Good idea with message. Music support was strong.
Improvements: Story was hard to follow. Lighting was so dark at points hard to make out image.
Positives: Spooky. Nice job on the fake blood effects!
Improvements: Sound was a bit sparse, and some ambient sounds or sound design elements could really increase tension. The music up front seems a little off to me - personally I think it might have been cool to have some music playing on his phone or the radio etc naturally in the scene.
Positives: The opening shot The music was perfect for this PSA
Improvements: I believe the all PSA need attribution... We are not experts. Maybe tell me where to go to get more help? More close ups to build more suspense.
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