Neuqua Media Promo - ID# 166

Neuqua Valley

School Promotion

Entry Description

A fast-paced, detailed promotion for the media department at Neuqua Valley. Music licensed from AudioJungle

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/24 1:59 pm - Too much reading. Hard to follow at times. Kind of boring at times when it’s just a black screen for a period of time.
• 4/9 9:51 am - Great start, it grabs the attention of the viewer. Great job, the text is great the music fits it perfectly, and it keeps the viewers attention. Don’t say thank you for watching. This is a prefect promo video because I kept watching it, not for mistakes, but for the creativity and the matching to the beat. There is a change that maybe the font could, be better, but it does not distract which makes it work.
• 3/3 11:43 am - +This is such a fun idea! +Good editing to the music, keeps me engaged the entire time + from a producing end this is relatively simple...you have photos and text.. I think it's genius! -Maybe the font could be a little more interesting? Or change throughout?

Judge 1

Positives: -Dedicated to the established tempo -Effects on the words weren't over the top. They kept tempo and aided the feel -Concept is an excellent way to turn any image into content. -Idea simple enough to keep people reading. Also, has the viewer take up the challenge to absorb the information. Very nice.

Improvements: -conspicuously missed opportunities to show pertinent pictures under the words -Seemed to have more words than the message requires. But hey, if you have to add content to keep the tempo, then you've gotta get that content. -some words could be truncated: Fil(ing), broadcast(ing), etc. -No images toward the end felt like I missed the payoff.

Judge 2

Positives: Excellent editing to show the broad range of classes offered! message conveyed through text was very effective

Improvements: most of the imagery presented were still images - some video/action interspersed could have provided more energy some of the images were on the screen for such a short time that I could not comprehend what they were... perhaps a little longer on some of the images

Judge 3

Positives: I want in! Love the format, but a little too much info. Maybe focus on freshman level and make separate videos.

Improvements: GO ALL CAPS! When bringing in various words, without knowing if they are the first/second word, it confusing with random capital letters. Also, maybe a few more visuals to start before jumping right into the text. Slow down a few times, especially when showing a course title.

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