Twix Commercial: Twin Edition - ID# 160

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Commercial

Entry Description

This is a commercial featuring two identical twin sisters eating the "right" and "left" Twix bars to see how they affect them differently. Each side of the Twix identifies the different personalities and then the sisters change sides.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/25 10:29 pm - Great concept. Strong pacing. Fun idea to have them as twins. Effective logo and slogan. I'd watch it again!
• 4/25 1:21 pm - Works well - Really great concept, and obviously a smart use of available talent. Nice pacing and edits. Good choice of music. Overall a really fun video. Needs work - You start off with the split screen featuring right/left, but then you don't follow through with the concept. Instead, there's color vs. black and white. It would have been nice to maintain one sister as always being on the left side of the screen, and the other on the right. Even if it wasn't split-screen, you could do it in your horizontal composition.

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