Girl Football Player - ID# 179

Waubonsie Valley

News Package

Entry Description

News feature on a sophomore girl who plays high school football

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/23 7:01 am - Good introduction for the story. VOs were well-paced. While the interview with the player was good, I would have like to hear some other viewpoints - either from her coach or other players. How is she fitting into the team from their perspectives? Tie that last VO back into the story. “Sade and her teammates take on Neuqua tonight….”

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