College University - ID# 200

Metea Valley

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Music provided by Digital Juice.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/25 9:08 pm - Excellent satirical work, made even more biting in lieu of the recent admissions scandals in the news. The writing, performances and production value were all top notch. Excellently done. This was one of my favorite submissions in this category. The audio was very well mixed and the editing overall, was well paced. It is clear that your team researched this satire by studying commercials from other colleges. Well done.
• 4/12 11:43 am - I like the satirical feel of this whole thing, there's definitely some contradictory humor through irony at work with this. Overall, I think you captured and poked fun at the whole admissions process and the supposed high-stakes of getting into a "good" college. Nicely done.

Judge 1

Positives: Sound: I thought your VO was well delivered by your voice actor and balanced nicely with your well-chosen music track. Camera: Your framing, composition, and angles were all well executed. Nothing especially innovative, but solid work.

Improvements: Story: I think your best lines come at the beginning. By the time we get to bathroom etiquette, it feels like you’d kind of run out of ideas. Could be a clever idea, but I’d focus on your script a little more next time.

Judge 2

Positives: Fun concept with a series of good comedic bits.

Improvements: The editing could be tighter and more imaginative.

Judge 3

Positives: Great concept—awesome satire

Improvements: n/a

Judge 4

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