4/9 9:15 am - Good job promoting this event, and teaching the students what to do for it. You need to watch the headroom on the people talking. I am confused is this done for both games or just one of the games? Your point portion can be a little confusing for the viewer. Fade the music out on this, do not just end it. Also, try to have more close- up shots of the students in the crowd.
3/3 10:52 am - +Good job getting all of these students together to film! That's an accomplishment on the producer's part.
- There's too much headroom in these shots. I would tilt the camera down a bit for individual student shots.
-Text at end could be more interesting. Looks like a basic title. Can you have it fit the piece more?