Highlights of Glenbrook South's nationally ranked Titan Poms. Permission to use Isn't Lovely by Redrose
Positives: -I'm not sure what the vibe of a moms performance is, but I know what I'd expect tased on this promo. The concept was basic, the execution was simple, I wasn't told too much. Excellent concept. -The silhouettes combined with appropriate pacing with the music and good shot selection put together a 'feel' without having to hold my hand. -smooth camera moves appropriately timed
Improvements: -Nix the front light on shots where you can see dancers' faces, or iris down to keep the silhouette going. You can blast white in post. -don't use the shots that shoot off set. Breaks the mood. - I don't know if the music selection had a portion after the beat drops but without the tape recorder business. Seemed stylistically incongruent. Otherwise, the music was perfect.
Positives: Interesting technique of using the white backdrop to isolate the figures and show dance technique Individualized attention to each of the dancers
Improvements: Wasn't sure of the "story" - seemed like a highlight reel of amazing dance technique Variation in the camera angle - perhaps a shot looking down on the dancers?
Positives: Great camera work, and a nice touch with the slo-mo at the end.
Improvements: Maybe a little more info up front.
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