Titan Poms - ID# 23

Glenbrook South
School Promotion
 

Entry Description

Highlights of Glenbrook South's nationally ranked Titan Poms. Permission to use Isn't Lovely by Redrose

Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/9 9:14 am - This video is visually stunning and it looks very good with the lighting, because it helps to create a nice separation for the girls. The music works for this, but I wish that it matched the beat more than it does. Try to use more closeup shots so that we can identify the dance team members, this will also allow for some more fluid editing.
Judge 1

Positives: -I'm not sure what the vibe of a moms performance is, but I know what I'd expect tased on this promo. The concept was basic, the execution was simple, I wasn't told too much. Excellent concept. -The silhouettes combined with appropriate pacing with the music and good shot selection put together a 'feel' without having to hold my hand. -smooth camera moves appropriately timed

Improvements: -Nix the front light on shots where you can see dancers' faces, or iris down to keep the silhouette going. You can blast white in post. -don't use the shots that shoot off set. Breaks the mood. - I don't know if the music selection had a portion after the beat drops but without the tape recorder business. Seemed stylistically incongruent. Otherwise, the music was perfect.

Judge 2

Positives: Interesting technique of using the white backdrop to isolate the figures and show dance technique Individualized attention to each of the dancers

Improvements: Wasn't sure of the "story" - seemed like a highlight reel of amazing dance technique Variation in the camera angle - perhaps a shot looking down on the dancers?

Judge 3

Positives: Great camera work, and a nice touch with the slo-mo at the end.

Improvements: Maybe a little more info up front.

Judge 4

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