Orchesis - ID# 230

Vernon Hills

School Promotion

Entry Description

Promoting a near professional dance recital by utilizing footage of the the practices. All the performances were completely coregraphed and performed by students within the high school.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/9 9:07 am - Good shots, but some of them are too close and it makes it a distraction. I like the lighting in this piece and think that cinematography is solid. I would like to see it trimmed down a little bit because it does become a lot of the same stuff as it continues. This could be about :45-1:00 and it would be even stronger. Greta motion with the camera as you follow the action.
• 3/3 10:40 am - +Cinematography is impressive! Nice fluid movements. - I would add additional details on the graphic... where? time? cost? -Package gets a little repetitive. I think you could cut it down to about 1-minute and the length would be more appropriate.

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