You're It - ID# 264

John Hersey High School

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Two teens are involved in a high intensity chase scene.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/21 9:43 am - Good use of natural sound and music at the beginning of the video. Good use of Close-Up shots. I liked the choice of using different music during the elevator shots. Editing was well done.
• 4/17 8:43 pm - Nice chase scene overall with some good coverage concepts. Shots were all well exposed for the most part and the focus was largely good. Music choices worked well and the edit was mostly well paced. In terms of your story, I think you needed to build your rising action up even more. The last moment before the girl tags the boy could have been a large, cinematic standoff/stare down with building music. It would have made for a more comedic payoff. With the camera work, use a stabilizer on the pov shots or work on steadying the running shot. You can always film it slowly and then speed it up in that particular instance. The shots at the beginning needed a bit more light. Lighting for darkness is necessary to give you a more properly exposed shot with less grain.

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