why is everyone looking at me - ID# 275

York

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A young man battles with his personal anxieties, as he struggles through everyday life. Music: Sad Epic Emotional Music - Farewell Life https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eD0XEH3qVCk Clock ticking: Clock Ticking #1 / No Copyright Sound Effect https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZJkamsEwato

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/26 6:55 am - Faucet to loud to hear voice over Like the natural audio mix (pulling out/closing drawers) Loved the shot at 2:15, but hung on it a little long, and young lady in the reflection was a distraction Quit looking at me, maybe need more of a reaction shot when yelled Shots to long at end through halls Not still sure what the purpose was (anxiety, shy, insecure) Not sure of the message you were sending
• 4/25 10:17 pm - The compiled audio of all the voices talking at once worked well. His singular thoughts could have been a little louder, it got a little bit lost. You had multiple locations, which was good and worked to see that the voices/anxieties followed him everywhere.

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