Running Documentary - ID# 283

York

Documentary

Entry Description

Story of influential marathon runner. Songs - Marcus D Trophy : https://youtu.be/UzRMpT02_u8 Odesza Across the room : https://youtu.be/bkiM6vbICp8

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/25 8:15 pm - Uses copyrighted music
• 4/22 3:06 pm - The audio is distant, but the broll is well shot and covered, especially the nature shots and the variance of speeds. The broll at the end, with the sound effects is too much and it feels like you're filling in where the story didn't go. There wasn't a lot of substance to the story as it felt more like news interview responses rather than a documentary.
• 4/20 1:51 pm - +Nice b-roll in terms of photos as well as actually going with the runner on her jog -Audio sounds like you are using on-camera audio. If possible it would be best to use an external device like a Zoom recorder to record more high quality audio -Look space is incorrect. follow the rule of 3rd -background for interview seems very radom. background should help enhance the story.
• 3/5 1:35 pm - Positives: Interesting story; good use of b-roll and still images. Camera movement on b-roll adds interest and is generally done well. Areas for improvement: Audio is a bit echoey. Choose locations for interviews with the acoustics in mind.

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