Broadcasting Class Commerical - ID# 296

York

Commercial

Entry Description

A brief commercial to influence students to enroll in their school's broadcasting class. Music: https://youtu.be/GF52rUyMTiQ https://youtu.be/vhu-AEvzDtM

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/25 12:27 pm - Works well - Fun concept to advertise the class this way! Lots of great B-roll. Good choice of music. Good information and reasons to join. Needs work - The text is hard to read sometimes and overall looks very amateur. If you're trying to promote broadcasting class, be sure that everything looks professional in the video.
• 4/25 9:26 am - Yay for promoting Broadcasting Class!!!!! You had some nice shot variety going on and I think the transition from black and white to color worked well with the feelings you were trying to evoke. There were a couple of text transitions that overlapped more than I think they were supposed to, and maybe having different text (font/style) or having it overlay on a color would help the text be seen because sometimes it blended with the background. Love the shot of the students walking and laughing.

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