Krispy Kreme Hits Hillside With a Family Favorite. - ID# 297

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News Package

Entry Description

A brief news package on the grand opening of a new Krispy Kreme in a nearby town. Music: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5fWfMg535vM

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/23 7:06 am - As a reporter, you should be telling the story more and not let it be led by your interview. Frame the shot so you’re not in it and make sure the SOTs help to support your VOs, which are telling the viewer about the story. Don’t say “signing out” at the end - it’s cliche. While most folks may know where this place is, don’t assume that - give them specifics.

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