4/9 10:21 am - You do a good job of capturing the bowling and a solid job matching the audio to the video. Try to have the subject mic’d so that they can be heard more clearly for the viewer. Try to have close-up shots to help put the viewer in the video. I would also try to use creative camera shots if possible, put on lane as they approach, challenge yourself with this. Solid lighting for it being at a bowling ally. Watch minor jump cut.
3/3 11:54 am - +Like the diverse b-roll at the beginning
+Like that the background in the interviews has to do with the story!
-A challenging of filming in a bowling alley is definitely audio...we can hear a lot of background audio