We are Geneva - ID# 307

Geneva

School Promotion

Entry Description

Music provided by Geneva High School senior Evan Fenne

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/24 2:03 pm - Good narration . Clean audio. Is this a general promo or and athletic promotion?
• 4/9 10:49 am - I like the script of this video, but I think that some of the shots could be better. All of the interviews should be in a similar place if possible. I would try to add some more lighting to this, and get the video moving even faster. I do like how you show a diverse amount of sports from the school.
• 3/3 1:24 pm - + Overall I like this concept a lot. There's some nice writing at the beginning. The story is clear and as a viewer we understand the intention of this piece -Some of the shots seem dark. I would bring an on-camera light with you when you go to shoot.

Judge 1

Positives: -Standup lighting adequate. -Good exposure on football and gymnastics

Improvements: -Standup lighting flat. That's fine but that it feels separate from the other content. -Iris a bit hot on most standups. -Low res logo tag. Edges are noticeably rough. -Mic over modulated. -Some soft focus.

Judge 2

Positives: Liked the use of teacher and student voice to establish the school Quick editing helped to establish a broad range of students involved in the school

Improvements: Larger variety of transition elements could have helped create more "energy" in the piece Some of the adult narrative was a bit flat - sitting behind a desk - formal - shots of them in different areas of the school could have helped to illustrate the school building

Judge 3

Positives: Stellar beginning with the voice over and quick cuts. Ended nicely with the footage coming together. Great work!

Improvements: Strong start - keep the voice overcoming. Also, try to shoot with a single camera for consistent lightning/frames.

Judge 4

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