GTV Ness from September 25, 2018
Positives: Visually it was a nice swim package with good use of b roll. Anchors did a good job
Improvements: Nat sound in packages is uneven. Sound bites are low. Late cuts between cameras. It would be nice to be able to cut from an OTS to the other anchor without first losing the graphic.
Positives: - Your open for the show is terrific. I love the drone shots, the usage of natural sound and it just makes me feel like I'm a part of your school. That is really well done! - I like that your producer wasn't afraid to utilize graphics and different camera shots. Also, the swimming story is well done. Great natural sound, different shots, good interviews.
Improvements: - Try to use your interview backdrop as another way to tell your story. It's easy to just have your subject stand in front of the wall, but it's a much more engaging shot to have them in focus with depth of field to provide some sort of background. The pool would have provided that. - There's "dead time" between your stories. That would be a good place to utilize some transitions and/or video to smooth that awkward pause.
Positives: Nice enthusiasm and delivery from the anchors. Strong editing in video open (although it was a little heavy on the sports highlights..would like to see more variety from school events)
Improvements: Transitions between anchor reads could be much smoother. There were several awkward pauses and moments where the graphics drop out early. Audio in the sports package was all over the place. Levels need to be consistent and audio dissolves would help the rough spots.
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