VDAY PSA - ID# 311

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Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

This video is a public service announcement highlighting VDAY, which is a global activist movement to end violence against women and girls, and is celebrated on Valentines Day to empower these victims. Music used link: https://youtu.be/LzAdriWGgts

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/25 7:30 pm -
• 4/25 7:30 pm - There isn't a clear call to action at the end of your video. You explain V-Day well and it's purpose, but what should your audience do? A few of your speakers also seemed to be reading off a prompter or sheet of paper. I would try rehearsing a bit more before filming.
• 4/22 12:51 pm - I don't know if this is in the right category. I think this would fit nicely into school promotion as an event. Some things to work on is diversity of women different races and ages would be a nice touch. Also, a better mic to balance your sound and voice over.

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