Errands - ID# 32

Glenbrook South

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

A juxtaposition between purchasing small everyday objects and purchasing a gun from a private seller in America. Meant to show how broken the system currently is.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/25 7:12 pm - This was one of my favorite PSA's. I like the juxtaposition used and I felt it made the delivery of the message very impactful. However, I'm left wondering what your call to action was for the audience. Your final text faded very quickly.
• 4/22 12:10 pm - I thought this was well constructed. I appreciate that you tackled such a tough issue. I think you could have layered more audio towards the end and maybe explore more shots with more kids running through the hall or a group of kids in a classroom under desk.

Judge 1

Positives: Great story, well executed. Good job.

Improvements: Some lights dark and hard to see images.

Judge 2

Positives: This is a solid concept for illustrating your idea, and you picked good examples.

Improvements: I liked seeing the information at the end to give me context, though I'd be surprised if you could buy a gun without an ID check for age from any seller anywhere who was operating legally. Sound design was a bit sparse.

Judge 3

Positives: The juxtaposition worked here.

Improvements: Audio seem echoey at times. Some of the shots were dark

Judge 4

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