Astros: This is Us - ID# 325

Shepard

School Promotion

Entry Description

Showcasing Alan B. Shepard High schoolʼs diversity, Astroʼs: This is us explores the amazing atmosphere created in our school.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/9 9:49 am -
• 4/9 9:49 am - The camera work for this could be a little smoother. At the 17 second point put the camera in the middle of that group, and get the viewer engaged with the process. I like that you used a diverse amount of shots in this video, and seem to display what the school can offer to students I just wish some of them were more closeups than what you show. At the end just stop on the logo in the floor.
• 3/3 11:41 am - +You seem to cover a diverse range of areas within the school which is great! -Camerawork could be improved. Be sure to check your white balance as sometimes it is incorrect. Sometimes shots are shaky. There are a few shots that hold too long--like underwater--or are not necessary as they don't tell us much--girl walking away with tripod.

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