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Positives: Excellent use of music, camera work/collage of pictures into an excellent introspective shot from behind your interview subject to start off this narrative! Very nice, creative use of interview look - I liked the empty theater and the lighting. Excellent use of old pictures/footage. Good use of movement. Excellent use of "Title" pages to set the individual themes. "I Don't Know..." "Follow Me" etc. kept me interested!
Improvements: Double check your lighting of the interview subject. The lights from above are much "Hotter" on the top of his head, while his face is much darker - try to even out that lighting and make it softer on top of the head and brighter on the face of your interview subject.
Positives: The opening is beautiful in terms of the visual and sonic imagery. Terrific use of found footage. The film moves so well!
Improvements: The talking head interview is a bit dark. The music starts out well but can be more integral to the storytelling as the film moves forward.
Positives: Great use of stock photos. Very inspirational story.
Improvements: The lighting on the interview needed a bit more front light on the subject. Some stock war footage could have been used.
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