How to Top Knot - ID# 333

Shepard

Demonstration

Entry Description

I made a how to video on doing a unique style on your hair. This demonstration will help people come up with ideas to do to their head. My video will go in step by step on how to do that.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/23 12:24 am - *Strengths 1. Fun topic 2. Use of split screen - effective approach 3. Appropriate idea for introduction (just expand on this) *Areas for improvement: 1. Your materials are introduced rapidly - you may have wanted to say more about some of these items. 2. Don't be afraid to use a tripod. In many instances, the steady shots will give your pieces a more polished appearance. 3. Your narration also can include relevant and interesting background information related to your topic. The process alone likely will not be enough to keep the audience engaged. 4. You can add variety and often times clarity to your pieces by adding more variety to your shot compositions.
• 3/12 3:07 pm - Nice graphics and music choice. Would have been good to add some different camera angles. Good voice over and instructions.
• 3/3 9:51 pm - Nice Clear steps. Good idea to speed it up! Narrator has nice, clear voice. Could use music underneath throughout. The opening cuts to black as transitions are very harsh and a bit distracting.

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