This is a four and a half minute excerpt taken from the multi-camera live broadcast of Neuqua Valley's Variety Show.
Recent Teacher Comments
3/5 2:38 pm - DQ-- too long for the category, which is a shame.
Positives:
Good variety of shots that are generally framed well, capture interesting angles of the artists, and are directed to add interest to the performance. Good use of lower thirds. Areas for improvement:
Opening long shot includes a distracting silhouette at bottom @:58. It works only if a lower third is on the screen--same shot at 3:38 corrects that.
2/28 6:21 am - Nice use of lower thirds
Good Color, lighting, audio (adapting to the live situation)
Perhaps experiment with moving shots and dissolves to add emotional heft.
Shots like those at 4:06, sort of awkward, not giving you the emotional aspect you want.