Secret Santa - ID# 354

Metea Valley

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

Original music provided by Digital Juice.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/26 7:00 am - This really wasn’t as much of a story, certainly not a dramatic one, it was just a bunch of stuff happening. I know some will appreciate it, but I had a hard time getting sucked into your story. The shots could have been more helpful in communicating what the audience should see, but I got the impression you wrote, shot, starred, and edited this all by yourself (in one night). You had some great ideas but when you work with a team it helps to take those ideas to the next level.
• 4/25 12:23 pm - The music was a little loud, so it made it hard to hear the dialogue. It was funny.

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