To raise money for the Eisenhower Music Department, the school hosted a Pancake Breakfast Fundraiser. Reporter Kyle Smith gives the full story.
Positives: -I really loved that a standup was included! That stood out. It takes creativity, forward thinking and extra effort to include standup. -Way to include lots of different interview subjects! Little kids can have great soundbites in stories! -Lighting and color was solid throughout the entire piece.
Improvements: -Interviewees shouldn't hold the stick mic. Ideally, we don't want to see a stick mic at all but you can also frame the interview in such a way that when you hold it for the interview, you don't see it. I know this can be tough though if that's the only tools you have! -Bring up that natural sound a little bit. To hear the pancakes sizzling or the crowd chatting during the breakfast really adds a great element for the viewer.
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Positives: Like the little boy's bite
Improvements: There is a long bite from the choir director about the choir and the band. Part of it should be covered by broll of the band. This piece misses the mark. There should be shots of the choir and the band in the piece. Piece is too long.
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