Underneath the Surface - ID# 359

Barrington

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

Everyone has a story that others may not know about. This video is a great reminder always be respectful and kind to those around you because you never know what people are going through. Music: Searching for Hope - AudioBlocks

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/25 7:23 pm - You have a very clear call to action at the end. However, I'm wondering if you could have shortened the wording a bit. It seems kind of long and might leave a more memorable impact if it was shorter.
• 4/22 12:41 pm - I really enjoyed your PSA and message. I would work on diversifying your people. Right now, it is mainly white male, and I know your population has more than that. Nice job with your message though, it really comes through.

Judge 1

Positives: Good idea. Strong message.

Improvements: Lighting varied too much from scene to scene.

Judge 2

Positives: Music and narration were good and I think this was a simple, effective idea. I like how you choreographed multiple people into one continuous shot and used speed changes to get between them.

Improvements: lighting and camera work were okay, but would have benefitted from some creative camera angles and lighting choices, or even some creative color grading. Watch out for people talking in a CU while voice over is happening, as it looks like bad lip sync sometimes.

Judge 3

Positives: The idea was good, the inner voices worked. speeding

Improvements: More variety of shots. Maybe tell me where to go to get more help?

Judge 4

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