Kindertransport (Highlight) - ID# 365

John Hersey High School

School Promotion

Entry Description

Hersey's winter play this year is a heartfelt play, Kindertransport.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/9 9:03 am - I am not sure this is a real promo, but more of a news package. Make sure to watch for the quick cuts, like :35 seconds. There are some good shots, but try to use some more natural sound in this. I like the lighting on this piece. Watch for some shaky shots in this video. Watch the jump cuts, use b-roll to cover those points in the interview.
• 3/3 10:11 am - + Good job composing interview shots. I like that the set is in the background. -There are some jump cuts, cover with b-roll -A rough audio transition between the two interviewees -Have your talent put the lav under her shirt, it will look cleaner.

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