Husky Den: David Reyes - ID# 367

John Hersey High School

News Package

Entry Description

David Reyes didn't just get into his dream school, Columbia University, he also received a full ride. Here's his story.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/23 7:05 am - While this is a great story, it’s not a traditional news package. There is no reporter track. It flows more like a documentary with the people telling the story and the music in the background. Add a drop shadow to the lower thirds - helps them to stand out against a background. Lower third for David should not be on screen for 22 seconds - 5-6 seconds at the most so viewers can read it - then lose it. 1st 4 pics used as b-roll are too small - hard to tell who is in the picture and what they are a picture of.

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