Declining - ID# 360

Geneva

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

All music provided by Audioblocks What happens when you best friend gets into your top pick, but you don't?

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/26 6:59 am - Are these girl’s friends or sisters, it was hard to tell because the dad seemed close to both of them. The acting was good, but the setting was not always believable especially them arguing in the classroom. And did the class really start at 4ish. Both of the characters seemed to make a drastic turnaround in the end, the nice one got a little snarky, and the selfish one suddenly became apologetic. You did a good job of connecting different scenes together, as they progressed through their day.
• 4/25 12:29 pm - It was filmed well and you did a good job of having a variety of shots in a variety of places. parallel action was happening and helped move the story along.

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