Win the Day - ID# 363

Barrington

School Promotion

Entry Description

Promotional video for Barrington High School Football

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/24 2:01 pm - Good VO/script. Players speaking should have been closer shots. Lots of black, blank space. Good editing.
• 4/9 10:37 am - I like how the music builds during the video. I also think that the editing is solid during this video, like the freeze and then move at :43 seconds, I know that sometimes students do not like doing these, but try to find a way to have the football players have even more emotion. Some of the lighting is dark, good job of editing to the music. I would watch the length of the video. Try to make it shorter, and use just the best shots. This will make the video even more engaging and fast moving.
• 3/3 12:24 pm - +Nice intro with drone shots and music which builds anticipation +Nice camerawork throughout! -voice-overs are a good idea but they seem a little forced. The director should coach the players a little bit so they deliver them with a little more passion.

Judge 1

Positives: -lighting and exposure on interview clips is very good. -Logo tag is very nice. Keeps the feel while trusting the audience to get it. -Very steady, smooth drone shots.

Improvements: -Let's get some feeling on the VO. -Peculiar phrasing. -Music mixed a hair low.

Judge 2

Positives: nice opening shot - assuming a drone narrative voiceover helps to establish importance of the football team and the individual players

Improvements: different music choice to help create ore drama? excellently done!!

Judge 3

Positives: Ramping it up was a great idea, but maybe a little quicker. Excellent audio and quick cuts.

Improvements: ENERGY! Need some energy with the voice over. Your actors need a pep talk. Try to cut down to 1 min and see how it looks.

Judge 4

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