The Life of Derrick Hill - ID# 379

Eisenhower

Documentary

Entry Description

My project is mostly about the life of Derrick Hill. Also the point that is talked about is why gun violence needs to stop.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/24 10:54 am - +Thank you for sharing this story. I appreciate the authentic feel of this documentary +You have gotten good converate in terms of interviewing various people close to Derrick -It seems like you are using audio from the camera. If possible, you could capture higher quality audio using an external audio recording device such as a zoom recorder
• 4/22 3:29 pm - Really compelling subject, and a good hook with the opening memory, but we need to see pictures or video to support what he's saying about him so we can connect with who he is as an audience that never met him.
• 3/5 2:35 pm - Positives: You capture how many lives Derrick touched with the interviews; Areas for improvement: First interview background is distracting since it's centered directly behind the subject; move the camera to the left or right to change the relationship of those 2 things; audio needs balancing--some interviews are difficult to hear.

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