Boys Soccer Prepares for Regionals - ID# 396

Maine West

News Package

Entry Description

This is a news feature on the Maine West boys soccer team.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/23 6:58 am - First shot - should be a wider shot of the team practicing or playing instead of behind the goal - you want to establish what this is about. Don’t need to say “we asked a few players…” - we know you’re going to talk with someone on the team. What’s a better way to lead into that soundbyte? Who are the players that were interviewed? They need lower-thirds to identify them. Avoid the “ping pong” when it comes to interviews and b-roll - string a series of b-roll shots together rather than going interview, 1 shot of b-roll, back to interview, back to b-roll. One interviewee we never saw on camera. First interview - dark - bring a portable light to add a bit of light to their face when interviewed. The story did not have any kind of conclusion to it. When is the regional game? Balance your audio levels throughout your entire story so they are all equal.

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