eLevated - ID# 40

Glenbrook North

Documentary

Entry Description

Our team rode the "L" back and forth to capture the beauty of one of Chicago's greatest landmarks. Our goal was to portray why the "L" has such a big impact on Chicagoans' lives. We also spent time getting unique shots of the "L", and provided a little history of this special train.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/25 8:22 pm - This is very well done on a unique subject but copyrighted instrumental "Sit Next To Me" by Foster the People is used.
• 4/22 3:16 pm - Great historical doc on an interesting subject. Great broll with a variety of shots and perspectives. The various audio levels are really distracting.
• 4/20 4:02 pm - +Nice attention-getting intro +The graphics are impressive. Interesting, creative, professional. +Nice variety of b-roll +Very informational--good job doing your research! -The VO makes this seem more like a news package than a documentary. Documentaries should mostly be driven by interviews.
• 3/5 1:53 pm - Positives: Dynamic opening, but don't use a lower third right before the main titles. Nice sequence :50-:59. Copyrighted music is not allowed, even the instrumental version.

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