How To Make a Peanut Butter & Jelly Sandwich - ID# 402

Back of the Yards College Prep

Demonstration

Entry Description

A tutorial video on how to make the best sandwich ever!

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/24 11:21 am - *Strengths: 1. Satisfactory video quality 2. Appropriate music *Areas on which to work: 1. Continue to work on composition of your shots. Consider the shot of the sandwich being cut. How might you have compose this shot so the viewer could see the action more clearly? 2. Make sure your narration is clearly spoken and not rushed. 3. The steps in your process identify what needs to be done and the order in which they need to be completed. You can strengthen your demonstration by providing more information regarding the techniques needed to complete various steps in the procedure. 4. Your narration also can include relevant and interesting background information related to your topic. The process alone likely will not be enough to keep the audience engaged.
• 4/2 12:40 pm - Fun narration I really like the energy and silliness. Good pace to the edit. The jump cuts were almost working until exposure or framing changed. Nice to see person eating sandwich.
• 3/4 1:48 pm - Audio is a bit muffled in warning. Shots are wobbly sometimes. You say not to use a knife, while you are using a knife. At times you whisper things, and it is hard to hear them. The framing of the sandwich is off—you are cutting off the bottom of the plate and sandwich. If you are going to do something this simple, you might want to offer tips about how to make a “better” sandwich, or variations. Would anyone really need to watch it as it is now?

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