BOYCP Senior Wrestlers - ID# 415

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Entry Description

An exciting look at BOYCP'S senior wrestlers!

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/9 9:47 am - I think that you do a good job of introducing the team and showing students who they are. The lighting is good, but the fact that the stand is in the background is a distraction. Take the time to remove it from the shot, Also, make sure that when you have the ending shot it is not so shaky. That takes away from the strength of the video.
• 3/3 11:38 am - + Overall I think the concept is good! I like being able to clearly see all of the wrestlers -Nice font choice, something creative and not something basic - I like that you are thinking about using lighting... but we can see the stand in the background of all of the shots -There's an abrupt audio transition at the end. Try to make that more gradual. -Cam movement at the end of shaky...try some sort of stabilizer.

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