BOYCP Football - ID# 416

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Entry Description

An exciting look at BOYCP'S football team!

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/24 2:02 pm - A lot of the LS of the team practicing with building in background. Composition of some players talking could be better Could be zoomed in more, less of profile shots, more noseroom..
• 4/9 10:39 am - Work on audio of the subject. Try to use more b-roll and watch the framing of the interviews. Make sure they are looking at the right spot. This seems more like a news story. Try to have even more diverse shots for this video.
• 3/3 12:35 pm - +b-roll is mostly wide shots, try to get some close ups so we can see players faces and creative shots of the ball, field, uniforms etc. +like that you interviewed a variety of players. -lower third is very close to the bottom of the screen. check "title safe"

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