Theatrix - ID# 419

Deerfield

School Promotion

Entry Description

Student reporter Brett Needelman uncovers the secret of lesser-known club here at the school: the improv group "Theatrix."

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/24 2:01 pm - Is this more of a natural sound package?? Good use of b-roll and natural sound between parts of interviews.
• 4/9 10:27 am - Good job using natural audio with the video, but you need to make sure that the audio is clear and level, at times it is hot. This seems more like a news story than a promo.The lighting is a little bit too dark and it distracts the viewer. Try to get closer shots when they are on stage and put the viewer right there with them.
• 3/3 12:13 pm - +Glad you included natural audio from the improv show +nice graphics, lower third +good information provided -The shot of the interview with the teacher is a little dark -the student speaking has shadows across his face and body...a change in lighting would be effective

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