This act in Glenbrook North's variety show, Warrior, has students dance, sing, and play the keys to the song 'Ready For It' by Taylor Swift. This was made with an 8 camera shoot, two directors, and other staff.
Positives: Great job! This was by far the best video I watched. You really did lots of great shots and kept it moving
Improvements: Shot at 1:22 - I know you didn't have control of the lighting, but it was so dark and hard to see I wouldn't have used it
Positives: Good audio mix. Good job directing live.
Improvements: Some lighting issues. Camera shots need to be tightened up. Cuts should be a bit more motivated.
Positives: A wide shot, when the dancers would have been better than the tight side shot at :34. The viewer has to struggle to hard to figure out if they should be looking at the keyboard player (who is almost out of the shot, the lead singer who is obsructed by the dancers, or the dancers themselves (and it is too difficult to see their routine from that angle because you are only seeing a couple of them). Nice move back to the keyboard around 1:09. Bad dark shot at 1:15. Another camera should have been set before the cue to go to it. At 1:21...the camera was on 2 dancers we couldn’t see. When a shot is too dark, comfortably segue to another camera. I would have liked to see a wide shot of the dance routine, at some point. Great job of giving the keyboardist camera time during the solo and using various shots to do it!
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