4/9 10:40 am - I am glad you covered a portion of the school that might be overlooked. Watch the audio and level it between the cuts. Try to make the camera work smoother. Try to edit out when they ask the question back. Again this seems like a news story. The stereotype sound bytes go on too long.
3/3 1:10 pm - +Glad that you interviewed a wide variety of cheerleaders!
+You asked a wide range of questions which provides more depth to the video package
-camerawork is shaky. Make sure to use a tripod.
-For interviews you could find a quieter place to interview them so we don't hear the practice going on in the background.