Remembrances of Grandmother - ID# 441

Riverside Brookfield

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A portrait of a woman who has influenced my life along with the art that brings her to mind. Music provided by gumroad.com/l/eltsC

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/25 10:22 am - This was filmed well. The black and white was a good choice. The voice over was a little hard to hear, could have been clearer. I thought it was emotional and thought out. The lighting was executed well.

Judge 1

Positives: The pacing of this film was beautiful. It flowed like a ballet mirroring the soundtrack. The framing and lighting was very compelling. Evoking beauty and strength.

Improvements: I am not sure this should be considered a narrative. It is more of an experimental film. I would have like more sound development of the different locales.

Judge 2

Positives: Some nice cinematography. Interesting source material.

Improvements: Slow pacing. Weak story structure.

Judge 3

Positives: This film looks great and is well edited.

Improvements: The narration could be used more effectively. Some of the shots aren't as visually interesting as others.

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