RED - ID# 456

West Chicago

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

What if a good friend wasn't who you believed him to be? (Included music DRM-free.)

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/26 7:00 am - I really enjoyed the first part of your video your sense of timing/pacing in your edit was good, I liked your shots, I was curious and anxious to see what would happen next. Great song choice. But once they got out to the parking lot, I had a hard time know what was going on and what my subjects were feeling, I would have liked some close ups so to help build the story and anticipate what might happen at the climax. It took a long time to get to the end, and I was left with more questions than answers when it was all over. You have a lot of potential, just work at finishing the story, and letting your audience know what the story is by dropping some very intentional clues about what is going on.
• 4/25 12:18 pm - The silent-film type film worked, some of felt it little slow, but towards the end it picked up. The part where it went silent was cool and the effect where his pace speeds up and the camera pixelates was nice. I like the concept. Nicely done.

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