Put Down the Phone - ID# 458

West Chicago

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

Just because everyone's doing something doesn't mean it can't harm you. A PSA that explores the unconsidered overlap between nicotine and tech dependence. (Included music DRM-free.)

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/25 7:40 pm - I would work on articulating in your voice over work. You sounded mumbly at times. Great shot composition. I would have also liked to have seen some text in your closing to summarize the call to action for your audience.
• 4/24 8:35 am - I like where you are going with this, but the fake props really invalidate your message. Stay consistent with the cigarette in your shot and if you are worried about bringing it into school or into an environment, that is where you can have that conversation with your teachers and administrators in asking permission or justifying the use in order to create the PSA.

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