How to Make Potato Pancakes - ID# 477
Maine West
Demonstration
Entry Description
This is a demonstration video on how to make Polish potato pancakes. The link to the music can be found here: https://youtu.be/kkKeve2mEzc
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/23 10:52 am - *Strengths: 1. Camera placement in oven - clever! Let's see more of these - give the viewer perspectives they do not customarily see. 2. Clear and enthusiastic narration. 3. Appropriate music *Areas on which to work: 1. The steps in your process identify what needs to be done and the order in which they need to be completed. You can strengthen your demonstration by providing more information regarding the techniques needed to complete various steps in the procedure. 2. Your narration also can include relevant and interesting background information related to your topic. The process alone likely will not be enough to keep the audience engaged. 3. Continue to look for creative ways to begin and end your pieces. 4. Look for opportunities to make your audio track richer by incorporating some nat sound. 5. Watch your focus. On some occasions your camera's focus reacted slowly or focused on the wrong object (for example, meat being removed from pan and placed on cutting board)
- 3/12 3:15 pm - Audio didn't sound good, person speaking too close to mic. It could have used more of a variety of camera angles. The graphics were good and the instructions were understandable.
- 3/3 9:56 pm - Good choice of subject. Nice, clear steps. Be careful of distracting things in the background of your shots. At times the narrator is too close to the microphone. The music fits the piece nicely. Why is avocado oil preferable?
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