Wexford Paper Clip Commercial - ID# 470

Maine West

Commercial

Entry Description

This is a commercial for Wexford Paper Clips. The music can be found here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=youtu.be&v=TEXYk4UT-qQ&app=desktop

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/25 10:09 pm - Cool animation with the stop-motion paperclips. In fact, the commercial might have been stronger if you just cut the beginning and end and left only the paperclip animation.
• 4/25 9:51 pm - Great stop motion sequence of the dancing paper clips! The dialogue seems a bit out of place because we don't hear the mother say anything to prompt the first or second line of the student. It was also hard to tell if she was confused or not that the paper clips had moved locations. You did a great job timing the music to end right before she puts the paper the clip on.

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