Put Down Your Phone - ID# 49

Glenbrook South

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

PSA about what people miss out on when they look at everything through phone screens. Written permission to use music by DeWolfe Music.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/25 7:38 pm - I love the juxtaposition of the different shots! Very creative! I would have also loved to have heard some of the natural audio from these shots as well.
• 4/24 8:30 am - This is one of my favorites. It is beautifully shot and executed. Some things to consider to make it even better is diversity in people and even diversity in age groups like small children or elderly folks to really encompass what someone maybe missing. Nice job.

Judge 1

Positives: Interesting message and good story.

Improvements: Some images didn't quite support concept. Had to understand at first.

Judge 2

Positives: Simple, original concept. Love the reveal of what was happening off-screen - really illustrates your message in a clear, elegant way. Nice, uncluttered audio too, although...

Improvements: ...you might have considered some layers of audio, or using audio to contrast the limited scope of what you hear on your phone, and what you hear in the real world. This would make your concept and message even stronger.

Judge 3

Positives: The changing of screen size

Improvements: Maybe some nat sounds Add some kind of attribution at the end?

Judge 4

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