MMEA Fest

By Zach Robledo. For MMEA Film Festival 2019 consideration - "Dramatic Narrative" category

4/26 7:03 am - For starters the suspect didn’t look like a killer he is to young and clean cut. That aside I had a hard time following the point of the story. I am not sure if this is right but did the officer commit the murder, because it was hard for me to make the connection because of the wide black and white shot against the color shot of the guy leaning down over the tub, I guess a close up with a distinguishing mark to make it easier for your audience to go make the connection would have helped. If the suspect was innocent, I guess I would have liked to see more drama in his face, because at times he truly sounded like a liar trying to save his skin. So I didn’t find his arguments convincing enough to feel like I knew if it was a frame up or not.
4/25 11:49 am - The dialogue was okay, but visually it was good with the black and white. Having the ticking in the background helped you feel like time was going on and added some intensity but sometimes was too loud. I liked the effect though.

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